Very nicely done! I loved the punctuation and the emotion that was in this poem! It tells a story and was very engaging. 5/5! keep up the good work!

A very emotional poem...its sad to see how many peple this happens to...

love the poem
goodjob

ashleigh

Tis a good poem
interesting
sad
but yeah good job
it has a ice flow and everything good job

Keenan

I can feel the intense emotions in here it was really sad .. the flow were a little off.good work. keep it up

Nice poem...the flow was off a little in places. but i felt the emotion in this piece..nice job.

Again I found this very sad....and if this did happen to one of your friends then I am very sorry to hear that it really is a shame. I liked it =] 5/5

Again, you portray emotion well, there's a few grammatical errors. Spell check would fix it nice. 5/5

marcella

Wow, there's a lot of emotion in this poem ~ I think the ending could've been a little stronger but nonetheless it was great ~

I can totally relate with this poem. my mom has never really been in my life. but i do give you total kudos for putting your heart into this poem. its REALLY GOOD. && thanks for my comment too. i meant alot. =]