Well first of, the title:
"I sit her alone.."
I think is supposed to be HERE instead of HER. So just fix that dearie.

otherwise the poem was great. it had some deep emotions portrayed all through it..i could really feel your pain while reading this poem (which is what a great poem is supposed to do). the words are simple but the meaning is oh so deep. such a sorrowful but beautiful write! keep it up! =]
and Stay Strong.
--Viola

You rock great portrayal of your emotions 5/5