Comments : Drama

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    This is another amazing poem. i think your poems are great because they are just so honest..i mean i can really relate to them.. and i understand excatly what you're feeling when I reading them.
    in this one i especially loved this stanza:

    I tried so hard to get you out of my head
    but it's like you're glued into my mind
    It's like there's just no cure:
    Once you've got the disease
    there's just no release

    ^that was sooo good!! :)
    great work once again. keep it up! =]
    and Stay Strong.
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its a well written poem with lots of courge... 5.5

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by FlashLove

    Hey,
    keep up the good work:p
    great poems
    Kisses from J.