Wow i loved it! i know the pain too. excellent poem. keep it up.

Thats a sad poem but its good

That us really good, I loved how it rythmed and I love how you kept the focuse clear, really nice and well written...one question though, why are you still alive? 0_0 ooo no wait 2 questions...and how do you know that when u die you wont just go to hell? [if hell exsists] AHA ANSWER THAT SMARTY! *pokes toung out* lol..im weird,
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What makes this poem sad is the fact that this situation happens too much. Very common, but good write. 5/5
Never stop writing.

` Liz =]

Wow! That was a great write. Very sad though. Glad to see you have enough sense to use your writing as a release & not actually follow through with a suicide plan. Things will get better, believe me, I've been there. I tried to commit suicide at 16 (& was damn close to succeeding) But now I am 41 years old with a houseful of beautiful kids. I love life & am sooooo glad I am alive (& have no brain damage from my attempt). NOTHING is worth taking your life..the situation will pass with time. Hang in there!!! Keep writing!! It was great.
Take care!!

Sad. short. ndd powerful.
it has so much emotion in it.
great poem. 5/5 :]]

Beautiful

Wow...beautifully well written..penned poem..great job..very emotional..deep words yet so powerful. . . I loved it
Take care
u deserve 5/5
-sarah

Wow..this poem is really amazing. your really talented. I love the emotion i felt in it. Keep at it..youve got real talent.

Beautiful poem! I really love it!

Hah i saw the title of this one...and i as just like hmmm...didnt realize it would say everything im feeling right now...but hey youre that awesome : )

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Excellent poem, well written and full of emotion. great job