Wow this was a neat poem! and sweet. this was well written keep up the good work!

This is a cute poem! I enjoyed reading this and I felt the emotion from within this piece! Nice job!

--Lindsay.

I thought the meaning behind the poem was very sweet and the words as well, I just didn't like the fact that you were so repetative with the same words. All in all a great right GG23

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and once you lose it theres no getting the feeling back...
sorry to add such a depressing comment, but it just brings up... memories

great poem tho, 5/5

xxx

Naww it is so sweet. =)
"the first time I felt alive"
^ favourite line. =)

Well done, she'll love it! =)

5 / 5

Best wishes,

Nicole
xox

This piece restates the same facts many times, each line is very simmular to the one before it for the majority of the piece so it lacks intruige and variety. I wish I could rave on and on about this piece, however that is not a possibility. This poem is not simple yet it is not intresting or intricate. The word choice is very bland and nothing about this piece was able to catch my eye.

I am sorry to say this but I feel this piece was far from your best and at mist it would be worthy of a 3.8 since that is impossible at the moment I gave it a 4. I look forward to reading previous works of yours and even works yet to come, if that is a possibility.