OMG one of your best i really love this i can see you really like this girl shes lucky to have someone like you to care so much for her anyways good job keep it up 5/5 :)

This gal seems like she has the world lay at her feet by you. Someone very lucky indeed, both of you are. Some people go their entire life searching for love, some have it thrust upon them, others merely glance at it or see it but not experience it. Great poem. Loving it.

chan
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Whos it about? but its good i loved it

Beautifully sad. it is such a down to earth poem. I love it, great job!