Very good the way you use two diffrent peoples conversation to mimic the fight thats going on inside however I cant help feal that a poem should not need an explnation befor it is read.
work hard just like you i'm trying to improve and hopfully we will both find insperation.

This is a very interesting poem.
I really like the idea of a conversation between that good and bad angel of yours, very creative.
The rhyming is good, but sometimes it's a bit off.. but I don't think that really matters in this poem.
A great piece of writing.
In short: It's a great poem and a pleasure to read.
Take care
Your friend
Hebe

This poem is awesome. Very creative. :]

Birgit,

This, I believe, is nicely written. Though I've read countless works depicting an inner confusion with a similar approach, this piece certainly hits home with me. It reminds me of the Great Controversy, or the battle within the mind. I like how seemingly sincere and heartfelt it is as well. Emotions are apparently poignant, throughout. Adorable. :] (I finally got the idea; however, I will hold my horses from teasing you though. :P)

Love,
Marian

First two stanzas are pretty good. very interesting to read. nice poem.