Comments : Cold house.

  • 17 years ago

    by June

    A sad and very heart touching piece ,I really enjoyed reading it and was left with a tear.If may sound funny because I have my kids around me but I can relate in a way because at times even with compainionship life can feel lonely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    What a sad piece. Lonliness is such a painul thing to live with.

    Absolutely alone
    Not even a sound from the phone
    Oh to pour out my emotions maybe shed a tear
    But there is no one to hear

    These lines really touched my soul. If only the walls could talk.
    Take care my friend.
    Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    This definitely tears at the heart. Life can bring us much pain and sorrow, but we need to go on cause we are strong, but first take the time you need to heal yourself and then you'll be able to kick life in the butt once more. And always remember, you have many friends on this site and elsewhere on the internet who are willing to lend an ear and listen, you are never truly alone. Take care my sweet friend and I do hope things get better soon. Smiles, hugs and love, Angela

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    I feel like this a lot its a great read/ good job

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This poem elicits thoughts of the utter despair of loneliness....well written and haunting....