This was a very nice poem , sad and very heartbreaking at some [points, wonderfully written and vocabulary was good, loved the way you expressed your feelings in it, great job,, ,your friend Tracy d 5/5

..already fallen too far.

This was an amazingly heartbreaking piece..written passionately..amazingly penned..
a simply awe-some write.. very sad - still very amazing.
Keep it coming...

~Wake~

Sounds effortlessly amazing

Your have such an interesting way of forming your sentences. It's truly unique. I enjoyed this piece, it paints a sad picture in shades of gray, your reader's aren't really sure of which is which. Great job.