I love the use of language you use in all of your poems, its just mad refreshing to see and gives it this very sophisticated vibe, great work tracy

What a lovely poem.
I really like your choice of words.
Great flow.

" And in the end you will find
love in your heart and peace in your mind. "

I love those lines.
Loved reading it
Take care
Your friend
Hebe

See the true beauty that life has to give
enjoy what you can long as you live.

And in the end you will find
love in your heart and peace in your mind.

fav lines
Loved the poem my friend
keep it up
well done
5/5
tc

Tracy
this is a very nice piece. Very uplifting.

And in the end you will find
love in your heart and peace in your mind.

It's a long hard battle to get to the end.
Take care Cindy

Wow, such a great poem!! I simply love it.

See the true beauty that life has to give
enjoy what you can long as you live.

And in the end you will find
love in your heart and peace in your mind.

Love these lines.. Great job!

Very positive and interesting poem. Topic is good and you described emotions greatly. You really wrote this piece greatly, I like the ending. Third stanza is my favorite, well done! I enjoyed in this poem.

Very deep and greatly written.
My favorite lines are:

-Love was given unto man
in hopes that he would understand.

The plan was to learn and know
to share and watch it grow.-

I like the rhythm of this poem.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

A piece of gold, this is what I can say about your poem :) 5/5