This is really good i loved it.
great words
5/5
laura

I loved this poem. sepcially the style you have used in it

I loved this poem. sepcially the style you have used in it

Ur poems r great!!! with more practice, u could b the best!!! listen, dont b shy 2 send me something. i'll help if u want me 2 & i'll give u some advice, write what u feel, not what evry1 else want 2 hear. thats how u'll succed @ being a poet :))