Comments : Pretender

  • 18 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    LovelY....... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 18 years ago

    by Meme

    Really niiiiiiiiiiiice
    keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I'm so over with my lies..
    So please let me go...
    And let me live my life
    Coz i can no longer pretend..

    I liked these lines because they showed strength in self character that you could finally stand up for yourself and say how you really feel. A great write.

    Take Care

  • 17 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    I like your honest directness. Good poem.