I loved the description and transition 5/5

This was very cute, the flow was great and so were the rhymes. I think this was great!
But one thing I noticed, maybe you could put more detail in your piece. Instead of saying he holds you in his arms, tell us how it feels in that loving embrace. Tell us what he smells like, how the sand feels on the beach. How his voice sounds, how your heart beats. Every little thing, with those details, this poem would be amazingly fantastic!
Great job!

Awww...sweet... =] this is a really good poem... it flowed nicely..5/5 from me.

This poems flow is amazing and beautifully written=]

Really good writing!!! x x

Very deepand hada tremendous flow

Amazing poem!!
you are so going under my fave authors

keep up the amazing work!!!!

AMAZING !!!
Keep It Up Hun x x