I loved it. Great job!

Tracy
You have penned another great piece. The pain of abuse hits you right in the face when you read this poem.
Excellent job!
Hope all is well.
Take Care Cindy

Wow your poem is so deep, Makes me wounder how much pain you have been though and does your past still hurt you. I always think its best to forget about the bad things because they do you no good. Its good that you write your feelings it helps you get over them. I remember typing when I was scared or sad and it helped me calm down and It turned out a good poem because my feelings where real and they were expressed in my poem. Your a excellent poet I hope I can learn some or your talent :) 5/5 Wonderful poem! ^_^

Wow!!!!! This poem is amazing!!!!! It was so sad, so touching and beautiful!!!!! You've done a gr8 job!!!
Take care!!!
5/5
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That was bloody painful.. loved the ending
a poignant write.. but still i found a piece of inspiration in there..
a superbly penned piece of art. .Loved it !

~Wake~

ItS a guD touchinG onE.... whaT emmA saiD iS truE..... 5/5

luzan

I cant put to words how this poem made me feel it was like something I have been trying for some time to but to words feeling that I have had for some time but you have it all there thank you so much I don't know what else i can say

"So I push on and make my way
live in this hell another day."

I think this sums up what some people have the unfortunate situation to got through but just keep pushing on. I hope anyone suffering can hopefully see that one day their pain will be over, they should never have to got hrough it in the first place.

Kelly
xx

Awsome poem!!!!!, like the line:So hurt me now all you can
if thats what it takes to make you a man.