Comments : Change of Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    What a great piece you have penned.

    We never know exactly how much time we have left.
    Never to late to turn around and live life for the best.

    Awesome lines. Love the message this portrays. Imagery and word choices are excellent.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Inspiring ending. Good flow and message. Nice piece of work!

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    Great work 5/5