Lol plz be nice about this one its my first love poem.
if it is really bad then tell me
i dont really like it but my girlfriend made me post it

I think this is great for your time doing a love poem.

This is very good for the first love poem--lucky girl!

You did a great job for your first love poem! I love, love poems, So happy and you capture it in a poem and now that happiness that you were or are feeling is going to be remembered forever.
keep writing.
5/5