That is really good, specially liked it how you kept refering to ur title, that was really good and the fact that it atcually sounded good after ur verse, it wasnt just a random thing, it was really compatable which was good, one thing though, u probably like it, but just saying... when u say
You pull me into
Your torture.
why does it have 2 lines? I understand why, But I mean the second line sounds a bit corny...like I mean if it said,
you pull me into,
Nothing but torture....or like
Not but torture,
Is what you pull me into..

or something, would sound better, just something missing...it sounds a little...miguided or something...BUT you must like it that way so yeah, think about it?
Nice work,
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Seems like you are in love with some one and all they want is sex... Not a good thing.