A poem doesn't need to make perfect sense, nor does the arrangement...It's all about expressing yourself, isn't it? A poem is supposed to be your way of speaking to the world, or just to yourself if you want. Your emotions don't have to be organized. Great write!

Haha Wow I would surely call that random :P I think I do that a lot when I'm writing a poem. I know what I want to talk about in my poems but I think I skip around a bit lol. Very Detailed made me smile and want to fly :) I love the night maybe I should swing during the night and I bet ill feel like I have spreaded my wings and started flying ;) 5/5 I loved it! Keep it up! :)

This was so perfect. I understood it in my own way. I related to it in my own way as well. This literally took my breath. The words and phrases you used made it SO friggin strong and I am putting it in my favorites. Thank you b/c this made me think! 100/5