'who could lighten off my load,'
should 'off' be 'up'? not quite sure.

'who could help me finding lost pieces,'
'finding' here I think should just be 'find'

though, again. overall an amazing write. Keep up the good work!
5/5
*Brittney

I can relate to this amazin poem

Thanks for comments .. I'll try my best :)

A beautiful Job of expressing of real love.... I like and enjoyed with your work....)

Your Friend.
RASHEED