Comments : Your Mine

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow.. this was such a beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading every single line of it! I love how you rhymed all of the lines and make it sound so professionally done.. That's something I still need to work on more. When I read it, I could just relate to it in so many ways.. I feel this same way about my boyfriend; He is my life, my world, I need him like the air that I breathe and I couldn't stop thinking about him the entire time I was reading this. Once again, wow.. great job!! Pretty please, keep up the awesome work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~