Wow.... This is so sad!!! Gr8 poem!!!
Very deep and emotional!!!!
Amazing work!!
5/5 =)

Nice title Makes me think :P What would I do in a situation like that. Very sad someone always needs someone else to talk to. If not they hold there grief in. I think I would stay close to my friends trying to make things a little better so I could try to live on but your right life goes on no matter what. Sad things happen even sadder that no one can help. 5/5 Sorry I ramble :X Great poem though. Keep up the excellent poems :)

I already told you what i thought of this...and how i felt about having a writer i look up to ask me for an opinion before its posted..but yeah, as i said its amazing work, and a nice form to see from you--keep up the good work tracy

Again, I don't find words to describe the impression that this piece of poetry left on me. Deep pain, despration, and non-comprehension. Thank-you for sharing.

Wow!!! This piece is very touching and sad. Ending is powerful and haunting. Every line is greatly written and you created amazing atmosphere. It is very emotional and imagery is excellent. You expressed emotions and created incredible atmosphere with just few words. This piece really deserves 5/5

Wow very interesting short but sweet 5/5

Its true Tracy
Good poem
The affect is exactly like you potrayed
Well done
Keep the good work goin
5/5
your friend
rohan
And ya well i wrote a huge amounta poems
YOu can take your time to comment a few or even one though I know you still will read them
tc

Very good.
Short, yet so much feeling.
I give you a 5/5.
Good Job.

I like this a lot because it's so simple and yet you feel a depth of agony. And I am SO sorry that these are all true, I mean it's made you an amazing poet but I'm sure you would have rather never written than experience these things. Actually I've written quite a few on abuse and I would love it if you'd check them out. I've never experience it personally and I would love to get your view on it. Thank you very much and you are so welcome for the comments. Once again, if you keep writing I'll keep reading, Tracy.
~Midnight Sun

Wow, gets you thinking.
Why do people do that, ignore what is happening right in front of them, or next door. A child can not do anything and therefore relies on the help of people who should know better. I think this poem is a bit of an eye opener.

Kelly
xx