Comments : My Last Dance

  • 16 years ago

    by shade127

    Very expressive

  • 16 years ago

    by stefanie

    Awe. this was cute but sad as well. it was nicely written but the flow was a bit off in places. but i liked it alot. great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    This was beautiful. I love it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    "I didn't know the dance that I dance with you,
    You would be my one and only dance."

    In my opinion, it is better to omit the word 'you' in the last line: it seems much right with me. Though on certain parts of the poem the flow is quite awkward, the emotions are truly emotive and descriptions poetic and poignant. All the best.