Disappearing
make D small plz

Rest i loved your poem
I got the point how you are ending your poem when he is goin
I hope that nothin such happens with anyone
good work I loved the repetition of Tic Tock
Keep it up.5/5
tc
your friend
Rohan

Yarr i agree with the repetition, it was good. me likey

Artistique! I love it!

Hmm.. well a very.. cooll way u described this event here.. you just wrote a stroy on ur murder.. cool.. gr8 wrk done.. nicely put together

Good job