I can very well relate to your poem it touched me 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This poem stayz deep in ma heart it reali touched me

u rock do wat u do best

lovin ur other poems 2

Title was so enticing, made me want to read this one, the start of this poem was so subtle, yet also so powerful. it was amazing!

the ending was so perfect, ended it well.

5/5 david

I loved it
it was simply deep

Very powerful poem you did an amazzing job it has really good flow!

But on my blue face you see a slight grin,
Was ready to die and hopefully ready to begin...
Fricken beautiful!

that was great not one word can explain how that poem made me felt :)

1million/5 hehe

-devin