Awww i love it!!!!...it so heart felt and made me smile...looking forward to the 3rd part!=]

This is awesome it keeps you reading i think its incredible

I like how you are doing this poem into three parts so fare this poem is amazing the flow is great you have good rhymes and you use powerful words

//* Aww, this was touching and sweet like part 1. I really enjoyed this; it kept me smiling from start to finish and I don't even think I blinked hehe.

I can't wait to read the third one. 5/5

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Aww, Jim, so cute! I love the way you rhymed subtley and it didnt seem forced or anything. Awesome stuff as usual hun, Love Greta xox

What a sweet poem.
Rhyme and word choice were great as in part one.
Loved reading this besautiful piece.
Look forward to read the last part.
Take care

Good poem the emothion really shines through I can wait for part 3 again my only negitive comment I that you have used i alot and not made it a capital I and your sentances do not begin with capitals.

Its been a while since ive read love poems. and i think this one's really great. makes me want to read more love poems. good work 5/5

I really loved this poem and ur part one, so deep and so honest...i hope this girl goes all well for you, i really do and let no heart break come,
nice work,
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A good flow some good rhyming but some of the lines didnt make sense 3/5