Hmm I wish there was a little more to it. It seemed too typical for me. Sorry I'm picky. The last two lines were nice. This is just me though most people will probably be the oposite and love it so don't feel bad. I'm just strict. I'll give it a three because you attempted to rhyme consistantly and you got the message across it's just it didn't blow me away like I wish it would.

Very interesting poem, I like the title. Second stanza is great and atmosphere that you created is good.
The pain is cutting into me,
And now I am all bloody.
I feel like I am dying,
I feel like I am falling.
^This is still my favorite stanza. Some lines aren't excellent but rest of this piece deserves 5/5

I can relate to this one. It was well written and i liked the words that you used. This one flowed better than the last one.. I really liked it.

This is really nice. I like it very muchly.
Its very pretty and well done.
good job =]

I can relate to this poem a lot ~ Just know that things do get better eventually ~

U are the only person i know that can pull off the 1st 2 lines rhyming
and then the second ones as well very well written 5/5