"Into his arms and to the gates I flee.
Only to stop at someone's heart felt plea"
^^ A great couple of lines. You have talent, you say in your profile you think they are bad, theyre not, trust me.

Greta xox

Oh god, that's so freaky and nerve racking..wow what can I say, that was REALLY GOOD! there is nothing I would change, I love ur style.....I also loved how you chose the death over ur love!!! THAT'S SOO COOL! and like, usually people choose love over death, so its like so awsum! but sad? 0_o nice work!!! it was excellent!!!
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