Gasttlee
You have done a great job on this piece.

You are lost
in a sewer of sorrow.

These lines really hit you.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

It was so dark and haunting
I liked the wording and the topic

My fave lines are;

Endurance is harsh,
for ease lies east.

Keep it up,
Laura

Great job Gasttlee. Thanks again for commenting, you are good at poetry keep it up.

Great poem. It was so dark!
I loved the words you used and I think the ending was strong.

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

This is wonderful! 5/5

A very dark poem with a great end.

" You are a stranger
to faces old and new. "

My favourite lines.
Great piece of writing.
Take care

Oh wow! This poem is amazing.. So creative and unique... The way you describe the life of this wanderer is so real and the dark intensity you potray is really deep...

Very unique and interesting poem. Atmosphere is superb and topic is excellent. You wrote this piece greatly. It really deserves 5/5

Good poem with a good word choice and flow. The wordings are unique and good. Keep it up :)

Tc
Fsams

Well, this was unexpected.
Very good unexpected, mind you.
The emotion was constant,
the depth and flow followed through.
Wonderful work with this one.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

Great poem, loved it.

"You are lost
in a sewer of sorrow."

Wow this was great.
The flow in this one is very good.
I can almost feel the mystery, loved reading it. Good job :)

5/5

Thank you for commenting on my work, it's very much appreciated. :)

Take care,

angelique

I like it. for this is really what a wanderer is. but a wonderer can be so much more. and you show that in your poem. i like it.

Amazing. I just realized you used the same form in your other poems. I like it. I think it's a different way of writing..it's very effective. I really enjoy your work. Shanik

A wanderer
is split from society.
Hmm it's a good intro.

You are a zombie
doomed from death.
^I don't really like how you changed it from as if you were talking about just a person, and then change it specifically to "you" but thats just me..

You are lost
in a sewer of sorrow.

You are a stranger
to faces old and new.

Your life is a mystery
in a mist of mockery.
^There's a lot of repetition here with the "you"'s and "your"'s, Maybe try and switch it up a bit?

Endurance is hard,
for ease lies east.
^haha, cute.

Darkness dives deep
as a creep of the night.
^I like the wording.

Wandering is no way for you,
for wade in water
wakes the world in wonder.
^This is a thing with you isn't it? Changing the lines randomly? lol.

Overall, it was good. I liked it, very well done. :)