Excellent job putting this tale to verse. Interesting from start to finish. Fantastic imagery.
Take Care Cindy

Ok so first off congrats on winning the contest. You truly deserved this win girl....let the comments commence! :)

Wow...this is dark for you! Congrats on coming to the other side! :) lol! But you did a great job...deception via murder makes a very interesting plot! And you pulled it off well, especially adding the taboo character. Great job!
~Midnight Sun