So sad, yet so powerful. These words hold alot of emotion, ^^ so 5/5 i could picture this. great job. ^_^

VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

luzaN

PleasE writE poemS anD wE wilL reaD..ratE anD commenT.. thiS 1 iS lovelY... 5/5

thx....

luzaN

Tyeah see that one is good, i like it when u write poetry like that, its so much more meaningful and powerful because you have talked about the feel and asked questions....so much better
good but could have been into a real poem, and longer and have a story behind it