You did an awesome job with this title. Love that last line, just perfect.

Excellent job on this poetry form. Deep and intense. Formed poetry is much harder than it looks. I have tried a few but not many.
Take Care Cindy

That was very descriptive and i loved the write 5/5

I really enjoyed this poem and I believe it was well penned. Great job and keep up the awesome-ness work ... Lol ...

I love this poem. I just love it to pieces. It is just so. . .words cannot describe it. 'claps' Well done.

Excellent poem both for its craft and its sentiment. I'm sorry, however, that you've acquired the experience that has allowed you to write it.

Another very nice write. i enjoyed your word usage. 5/5 all the best wishes ben thompson

I don't know why,i just like this one..

Shivers! lol. definitely good.

Anger and fights often fumed
Shallow skeleton is the tongues fate

^ i don't know why, but i really love these two lines...

definitely an amazing poem. great word usage.....

god bless

Very well done and very well penned. I like that style and think I could learn from it. I look forward to more. nice!