Comments : Pinoccio

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Based from the titles of your poem it seems that you really love reading books and know more about different history, all of those were really interesting. But as of now, I'll read and comment on this one.

    This was a lovely poem and from the way i read it, it connotes different meanings. About how we wanted to try something else, try to be someone else and so on (correct me if i'm wrong). But actually, i have to read it twice coz it was really confusing.But it was really nice. keep it up!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Soulful Ensemble

    You are right, it is confusing, because of all the things I am trying to convey. Its about everything you said and more. Its also about how people want to better themselves but have no idea how, and the people who are supposed to be there for them are useless.

    Its also about how life can be so disappointing you wish you weren't a part of it.. and that is why Pinocchio gives up and doesn't want to be human anymore after realizing what emotional pain is like.