Comments : What Friendship Is ..(Collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this collab. You have shown the true meaning of friendship :)
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Thats a lovely one....

    Nazeer

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great poem with great meanings and good word choice. I really like the way it expresses the qualities of friends and friendship. 5/5 for the beautiful work. I would like to give suggeations also.."every sin" better collocates than "any sin". In line 11 correct the typo "your/you're" Keep it up

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Amazing write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    This is really good. I like it ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    I really liked it. It is so true about true friends.

  • 16 years ago

    by jyzka

    Nice piece of writing... it really made me feel thankful for having a friend... just as you describe..

    excellent poem!
    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    This is just a nice poem, about what friendship is. It really describes it.. and it's beautiful =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great poem only this you spelled defense wrong lol. Great job though
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I liked this one alot
    i agree with you but yet i believe not all friends but true ones yes and i think you meant them by this poem

    "Friendship comes to those who seek
    It never comes out of nothing
    Every friendship is unique
    It really means something"
    i liked this part more