Comments : Dream Come True.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Oh wow!...this is truely amazing! i love it... i felt like i was melting as i was reading it..lol seriously i dont know i cant explain it..

    but it flowed perfectly...definately 5/5 on this one.. keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya
    tis a good poem
    good flow
    good job

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow that was a really cute poem hunn you made it flow so nicely i loved it<33 5/5

    p.s. thanks for your comment on my poems "anyone can see this love you killed is killing me" it really means a lot thanks hunn<33

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    "I could feel my feel starting to leave the land
    My spirits high; I was walking on the clouds"
    I love that line