Oh wow!...this is truely amazing! i love it... i felt like i was melting as i was reading it..lol seriously i dont know i cant explain it..

but it flowed perfectly...definately 5/5 on this one.. keep it up!

Heya
tis a good poem
good flow
good job

Keenan

Wow that was a really cute poem hunn you made it flow so nicely i loved it<33 5/5

p.s. thanks for your comment on my poems "anyone can see this love you killed is killing me" it really means a lot thanks hunn<33

"I could feel my feel starting to leave the land
My spirits high; I was walking on the clouds"
I love that line