Comments : Sex life??? Fantasy???(15 year old)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ben

    Ummm...Well. It was pretty good. It had nice rhymes. A very interesting topic. Very well done. Keep writing. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya
    great poem
    tis interesting
    lol
    and well written
    graphic also
    but hey that was what you were going for right??
    lol

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Dat was a interesting poem! good job! but i give u 4/5 . Go check out my poems! :p