ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

luzaN

Beautiful writings..
Excellent thoughts..
Marvelous outlooks..
Fantastic feelings..
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Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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Nazeer

Beautiful writings..
Excellent thoughts..
Marvelous outlooks..
Fantastic feelings..
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Write more, feel more and be with me for reading and commenting.. I like your poems very much indeed... 5/5

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Nazeer

This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

Nazeer

This is a very good poem.
I like how you discribed it.
Nicely done.
Take care

Woo-hooo
Awesome dear
Loved it fully and completely
Keep writing and dont blush others by saying your poems aint good in your profile
This one is rocking
5/5
your friend
Rohan

Oops! a great poem my friend- i like your imagination yet i feel sympathetic- if i read it at the last stanza but yes, its the fate and aslo its true- something we all waiting for- great poem