Comments : Contrast Fragments

  • 16 years ago

    by Willow

    Pretty creepy but at the same time beautifully penned. i love it.
    5/5. oxox

  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    This entire poem is great. But I especially like the last stanza:

    "Hands are own once more
    Secrets are no longer shattered on the floor
    Mounted aren't the history of death
    The end of the spell that is my meth"

    It was so powerful and emotion evoking.

    Great job. 5/5, easily.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tripp

    Such powerful meaning and emotion is embedded throughout this poem. amazing imagery and rhythm...I wish I could write like this haha.

    great job. keep it up.