Comments : I Want To Be OK

  • 12 years ago

    by Katran

    Its a good start. keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    It's easy to see how sad the situation in the poem is and many people can probably relate. Flow is okay and keep up the good work.
    I feel so distant,
    there, yet so far away
    Fave lines ^^^^^^^
    ~ Lainey

  • 12 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is good...i feel like this not asking to be happy or to be sad..just to be okay...i totally understand this poem...

    but one thing i suggest is to maybe make it a little longer...but its good the way it is... good poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    I love it ~ Short but true ~ And there is just so much power in those words "I want to be OK" ~