The longer your are there the more that you seem to learn.
Fall deeper and deeper into a peaceful sleep.
The demons soon will start to overrule.
[[Where'd the rhyme go for sleep? If you don't have one... I suggest breaking it up and making that a one line stanza. If you don't understand, ask and I'll show you.]]

There is nothing anyone can do for you fool.
[[There is nothing anyone can do for you{,} fool.]]

Now, I really liked this. The only problem I see is that ever sentence should not have a period at the end of it; it should be varied punctuation. If you want me to to go back and fix it, I will.

And anyways, I really enjoyed it. It is your best, I'll have to say. Or at least one of them.
Anyways, wonderful job, Brit, as always!

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5