What the ....That's quite random..... -_0"
"you�ve " - fix up
each paragraph I think needs a little more detail....to me now it's a bit short and a bit random....
needs a look
Luck 4 u,
Hidden

"With clouded thoughts
your not as smart."

Wow.. I can't tell you how true that line is. I really liked it.. and the poem itself of course =P Great job! 5/5

Wow..so deep and sorrowful...Your word usage was amazing with the poem

My fave lines are;

More worries enter the mind
the hole is deep
as your digging all night
without a fight.

Keep it up andy,
Laura

This was a good poem. yeah.. the emotions and the imagination were great but i suggest to add some more clear details coz it's kindda confusing.

Nice poem 5/5

Wow this iz really good, i like it.

Hope you don't mind..

'your not as smart..' should be 'you're not as smart..'

I really appreciated this poem.. I don't think it needs more.. it's quirkiness makes it more jagged, and that's exactly what depression is all about.. it's a lack of structure, and an inability to understand, and this has that rugged edge to it, that shows exactly the point you're trying to make.. at least, that;s how I read it!! lol.. Well done, hunny.. and thank you for my comment. xx

Nice. Good flow and that. If you can find a way to add a little more... emotion... to it... then i think it wud be perfect