I don't like the ending. I like the idea of this poem, it is short but powerful. First two lines are incredible. 5/5

The last line was perfect. And what was unexpected was the eleven roses fading away, I'm used to hearing how each one goes in the ways that someone loves another. Good twist.

Excellent poem. Every line is well written. Perfect and flawless. Hats off to your work :)

Tc
Fsams