Your first sad poem, its very nice and well written. I can relate a lot to this. I liked the wording and the feelings also. well done my friend =) keep up the good work. 5/5

One of your best in my opinion. The first few snazas keep the reader intrigued and reading until the end. NICE!

Truthfully, I hate sad poems. I like this. I can relate to it sorta. I've read a few of your poems, this is one of the best I've read so far. Keep it up =)

Good job on this write.

I'm locked inside a cage
a hell within my mind
each thought now turns to rage
were happiness used to shine

This stanza really stood out.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Wow.. I don't think Ive seen this side of yu before.. I hope youre okay. =D Love youuu

5/5

Greta, Take care.

This is a good poem.
It really kept my attention.
Loved reading it.
Take care

Dark, cool and mystifying! 5/5

Being locked in our own cages in the worst form of imprisonment that I have discovered.

Locked away with only our thoughts and unable to hear the voices of those around us seems like hell in itself.

You have done a very nice job typing this out. It appears that you have mastered the isolation process all too well.

Good write babe

--Sher

Thats a really good poem James! the flow is fantastic!!! great work, and dont worry, that writers block will you soon.
your talented... god thing I created creativity or you would have never been able to pull thiss off lol jks
Luv ya

It was really good and descriptive, i loved it. very good job, flow was wonderful, wording was great.