Beautifully written once again. 5

This was wonderful. I loved the detail and the vocab, outstanding. It made for a very powerful piece. Not to mention the concept itself was original and interesting. The flow was absolutely flawless. 5/5

marcella

Great imagery...i love the overall concept you stuck with on this one...its incredible work, i love the style, just...wow, amazing, keep it up!!!!

Excellent poem. Amazing written. I loved your choice of words and descriptions. The imagery was excellent in this poem as well. And the flow was amazing.

p.s. You should put this poem in the dark poetry section.

-Shannon <3

Hrmm, I know that I shouldn`t start off by saying awehh to this, but to me it is an awehh poem lol. Every little girl or boy needs their own hideaway - no matter what it looks like to the outside eyes, it is beautiful to them and I am so glad that someone used their talent to capture that time in life...kudos Darling, you`re a wonderful poet.

5.5
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