Very beautifully written. Job well done on this one 5+

This is so sad and written so beautifully. It kind of reminds me of a song, I think it was called, "God's Will", or something like that. Anyway, the poem was wonderful. The rhymes, word choice and flow were all so perfect here. 5/5

marcella

Wow...very touching write here....i love how your so versatile in your writing, you portrayed the stereotyping that our society shows on a day-to-day basis...it was beautifully written, amazing work..i love this~

Soo sad..nice poem 5/5

Good poem. The flow was flawless and the rhyming was good also. I loved the message behind this and your choice of words were perfect. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Awehh wow! This brought tears to my eyes! This is beautiful Darling, you told the story and you told it perfectly. I was brought into your words from the first line and kept in until the last, no distractions which is saying a lot for me lol. Great job.

5.5
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