Hey Paul
Aww this is a sweet poem. Very good use of words. I really liked it. You have such great talent and I would like to encourage you to keep writing. You have so much to offer by writing from your heart. Keep up the excellent work and I lok forward to reading more.
Take care always
Kristina

Paul, I take back what I've said before! you really touched me! you have a great talent! and I don't know why your work isn't the highest rated??? I love your poem and I gave it a 5 though im my scale it deserves more ;)
ReGaRdS