I like this. Reminds me of one of my poems. Short, and nice. It wasn't bad either. Keep it up.

It was short and sweet, yet the flow wasnt perfect and some parts seemed a little forced. But i really did think it has potential. well done
love Tara-Kay
x

I dont like rebecca -_-
I thnk she could be a lil nicer up on this stuffs -_-.
I Like this one. Its really good hon.
The flow was a little off but everyone has flaws and all
Great Job :)

4/5

~Mz.Raven

Love it x x

Your flow is a little off in this poem, however it has a good theam.

I don't like it. Sorry but I really don't like your poems. This one reminds me one your others.