by Jessie
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Wow, this is a really good and true peom. Keep writing! |
by Kris
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It is a very interesting poem. |
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I loved this...it was somber and gloomy but the wording was great...amazing write! |
by Erika
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Life is such an endless battle, full of questions that sometimes have no answer. This poem says a great deal, if one looks deeply enough at the words! Love Erika 5/5 |
by Jaymee
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This is a beautiful poem hun, it really touched me |
by Diana
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This poem shows discontent, anger, sadness and emptiness. All a complex mixture of depressive feelings. I know how it is to cry out inside of you when you are mute, when you feel trapped in a world that spins without an answer, enslaved by a system. It is very insightful and descriptive |
by Jackie
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Ok, this one hits hard and close. I love it!!! |
by Heather
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Oh how i could relate to this poem. i just want to run away from everything, crawl in a hole somewhere for awhile lol. very good write, words are well chosen and used. keep up the good writes! |