Comments : Broken

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    Wow, this is a really good and true peom. Keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    It is a very interesting poem.
    I liked it. There have been days that I have felt just like that.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I loved this...it was somber and gloomy but the wording was great...amazing write!

    Brooke<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Erika

    Life is such an endless battle, full of questions that sometimes have no answer. This poem says a great deal, if one looks deeply enough at the words! Love Erika 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymee

    This is a beautiful poem hun, it really touched me

  • 16 years ago

    by Diana

    This poem shows discontent, anger, sadness and emptiness. All a complex mixture of depressive feelings. I know how it is to cry out inside of you when you are mute, when you feel trapped in a world that spins without an answer, enslaved by a system. It is very insightful and descriptive

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Ok, this one hits hard and close. I love it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    Oh how i could relate to this poem. i just want to run away from everything, crawl in a hole somewhere for awhile lol. very good write, words are well chosen and used. keep up the good writes!