That is a good poem, I even like the topic. Perfect.

I likied this poem , the word choice was awesome, the flow was only a little off at the end, the emotion was strong, the meassage was clear. try reading your poems back to yourself after you haven't read it in a day or so, and you will be able to see where it is off at. 5/5

I very well written poem with a clar message the flow was good up untill the snd to last stanza where it wen't a little off however everything else about this poem was very good 5/5

I think it was good and its message was clear.

Another great poem, as with the rest of youre poems i like the emotion you bring out.

Your Poems Are Amazing. I Really Liked This One, Well Written.

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Keep Up The Good Work :)