Amazing, amazing... so amazing! Great choice of words, vivid imagery... I like everything about this poem.
5/5 from me

"In fading bloody embers" ... the word choice is perfection! Excellent write.

Short and powerful. I like the words you chose to use and the imagry it gives. Cant wait for you to write more Gary! :)

Mo

Truly felt it from this one..
an amazing write..
such descriptively short and so beautiful.. AMAZING

~Wake~

Your use of imagery was well placed in this one! 5/5

Fantastic poem, short but so impressing. I like everything about it, well done! I really love the way you wrote it, so deep and you said many things with just a few words.