This was very good, it flowed well, and held emotion and a meaning deep within. you carried off the style well and kept the flow going.
i loved it
love Tara-Kay
x

This is a cute poem! i like when people bring up questions in the poems!
but the ending is sad!

Ignore Rebeccas comment -_-
Your Poem was great hon.
Loved it.
I really loved the meaning of it :)
5/5

~Mz.Raven

A sweet poem very nice good layout emotion could be a little stronger.

Rhymes are typical. You have many mistakes. This poem isn't original and atmosphere could be stronger. You have too many repetitions and that destroys the flow.